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"I've been racking my brain, and I just can't figure it out."

"Figure what out?"

"Why you love me."

I love you because it's as natural as breathing to me. The way you laugh, the way you smile... it's like my sunshine. Your voice, the way you hold my hand; it reminds me why I get out of bed every morning. All your insecurities and your doubts, they're nothing compared to what you can accomplish. You're everything perfect and unique. You're the most amazing person I know, simply...

"Because you're you."
comments, suggestions, and critiques are appreciated. thank you ^^
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FoolyCooly5 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Student Writer
such a flashback just happened. wow.
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Student Writer
(:
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WinterLeave Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful!
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student Writer
thanks(:
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WinterLeave Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Stangler Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Simply said thank you for sharing your mind with us. Thank you
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student Writer
haha, you're welcome! and thank you for your comment!
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fudgeandyodels Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011
Oh... This is so beautiful. Reminds me of the past week..... So wonderful, So beautiful... :heart:

Thank you for sharing :heart:
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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fudgeandyodels Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
Can I share this on my facebook? I know there's someone else who love it :) Several someones, actually. lol!
Please?
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Student Writer
As long as I get full credit, sure. And if you could send me a link as to what people think, that'd be great(: Thank you for asking!
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fudgeandyodels Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
Oh Absolutely! It's your work and I would love nothing more than to share it!
I send you the link in note. Sounds good?
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Student Writer
yeah, sounds good:D
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OwlAlwaysLuvYou Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Writer
Lovely.
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Student Writer
thank you(:
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enchanted-elixir Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
This is insanely sweet :heart: and true at the same time. Beautiful piece of writing :)
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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enchanted-elixir Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011
my pleasure :)
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
A lovely piece. So true. Wonderful job.
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
You're welcome. :)
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ShiningInTheSilence Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
this piece is touching and lovely and so very sad. I read this and I think about how often we neglect to tell people why they're so important to us, what about them makes them so beautiful in our eyes. The piece wouldn't have as much meaning if what was thought was actually said, but I think things like that need to be said. I try and make an effort to remind people that they are beautiful and valuable and when I graduated, I wrote like 30 letters for a bunch of my classmates, thanking them for our time together and giving them some honest compliments. It was a lot of work but most people really appreciated it. One of those friends passed away recently, he was only 19, and I take comfort knowing that I told him what made him beautiful, there wasn't anything left unsaid. So I encourage people to be honest and be bold and love each other, because you never know how long you have. And when your loved ones pass on, you don't want to be left thinking about all those chances you had that you let slide by. </randomrant>
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Writer
I completely agree with you. And that's a wonderful thing you did for your classmates(: there should be more people like you out there
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ShiningInTheSilence Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
it's hard but it's worth it. :) I just want Jesus' light to shine. Or if you're not religious, it's easy to just think of it as being kind to those in need simply because it's a good thing to do.
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lonelyemogirl4evr Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
.......this is a beautiful piece..........
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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LeAnnza Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow ^^, nice job! :hug:
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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Renn-Ravengirl Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Writer
wow, :) Lovely.
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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FyreBurnsStrong96 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this!
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
thank you:D
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FyreBurnsStrong96 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:D De nada!
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RoxanneVL Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwwwwwwwww
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bk00 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student Writer
:love: Aw! How sweet.
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student Writer
thank youu(:
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bk00 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Student Writer
No problem!
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ERbear26 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lovin it :)
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Student Writer
thanks!
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Kimra101 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
This is amazing :) It reminded me of all the amazing people in my life who seem to be blind to how amazing they really are. I couldn't have worded it better myself.
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Student Writer
aw, thank you so much! ^^
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KomoLove Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfavoriteplz: Very cute : )
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
why thank you:D
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KomoLove Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Not a problem:D
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ShinuOokami Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
would you mind if i showed this to my girlfriend? it's awesome when i find things like this for her, it's a great prose too :P
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
haha sure, let me know what she thinks!(:
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HalfAbyss Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011   Writer
Amazing... Made me cry though... T~T
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kjod5 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
thanks! but I'm sorry you cried.. ):
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HalfAbyss Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011   Writer
No need to apologize.. D:
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